COVERAGE! COVERAGE! COVERAGE!
There were a few problems with my edit. First off, I need a tighter edit; the sequence was too long, it ran over 4 minutes. Also, I need way more close ups. The entire "film" was shot at awkward angles, some of the props/objects have more of a close up than the talent. I was also right about taking the whole first shot from outside completely out. It would be better just to leave the sequence as a collage of images, almost like a process, as in Ameli'e. I also need to consider my framing better and move more with the camera, while changing up the perspectives from first to second person. I need to plan where I place the camera in advance, and pay attention to the edges. Lastly, there is no ending.
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